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New - Shadow Breath

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This is my second attempt at this one



i think i have improved alot pretty please critique and tell me what i still need to improve and blah blah blah
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I like the aqua outlining you did on this one. I am not to impressed with the snout though. If you look, you can see that you gave her kind of an unnatural curve, like that of a ant eater... lol, also, you made her fur so flat and stiff, it looks bad. You should give her some more scruff next time, that way she looks like she has fur and isnt just a bald painted thing. I really like your detail on the grass however, and the clouds and moon are perfectly blended together with the sky. Great job on the rock too.